Tengou
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Tengou
Oct 26, 2010 14:26:23 GMT -5
Post by Tengou on Oct 26, 2010 14:26:23 GMT -5
If someone could read this and give me some feedbcak on my character that would be awesome! Then I can get started writing or something. trleague.wikia.com/wiki/Tengou
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beckstar
New Member
mOtHeRfUcKiNg MiRicLeS
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Tengou
Oct 26, 2010 23:19:11 GMT -5
Post by beckstar on Oct 26, 2010 23:19:11 GMT -5
I like him! He seems wicked chill, and it's nice to see a new trainer who actually has a team to match the rookie status. Don't really have an constructive criticism or anything 'cause there's nothing that really seemed wrong to me.
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Tengou
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Tengou
Oct 27, 2010 13:50:11 GMT -5
Post by Tengou on Oct 27, 2010 13:50:11 GMT -5
Thanks! Ya i thought that theres so much more room for plot if he doesnt already have a full team.
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