My Character SOLARUS Excutive Gant

[lookoverthere]

trleague.wikia.com/wiki/SOLARUS_Excutive_Gant

Here's the wiki page.
I think I may have went over board with the back story
Also, I cant draw so if someone wants to draw him for me please and thank you.
I had him pictured as Uryu Ishida from Bleach in my head.

[deloye]

One more thing. His parents should have ground his ass into the dust.

Also, how would he afford Smuggon tuition when his parents think he's on an adventure? Was he supported by a coven of witches?

This guy is a massive Sue.

"Hey guys, I hate my parents for no good reason, and I raised a Beldum faster than anyone ever! I also got straight As, and everyone loved me in school. I was too good for them though, because evulz. I was also the youngest lawyer in Tatsu history, and when my boss said that we were actually bad guys I said yeah sure dude I'll join you, because I am teh evulz."

Plus, how the fuck did he beat the council with an Abra. Several Smogon-level pokemon taken down by an Abra. Bullshit.

Refer to this page for your re-education. tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/VillainSue

Pretty much what this guy said, to be blunt.

[cephalgia]

...Yeah, that is true. Also, not to be nitpicky, but it's Executive. So, maybe new page.

[lookoverthere]

Smuggon University is a campus town. Not just a school itself. Shang paid for his tuition into the university and I figured everything else would be a free like public education. Also, why couldnt he just be smug about himself? Like one of those genius who look down at everyone for being inferior to him? It's not mentioned how many Council memebers were there. Abra's can be taught other moves through TMs. Also, with his parents were a classic case of rebellion. His not evil but he joined the evil team

[lookoverthere]

Also, Im not upset. I'd just prefer someone telling me whats the issue without the attitude

[cephalgia]

<Cephalgia> Alright. Well, maybe a little rewriting is in order, though it's a good start. The beldum evolving, being respected by everyone, etc things
<Cephalgia> Plus, a lot of turning evil without much impetus, he just sort of does it
<Cephalgia> Throw a few curveballs. If he's gonna be a villain he should probably be a guy who really has nothing to lose instead of someone who just threw everything off voluntarily
<Cephalgia> And... pretty much all Abra knows is teleport; so I dunno how he'd kick their asses unless he teleported around to confuse them or something
<SmoothCriminals> I never specified what Pokemon the battle council owned, You can teach Abra's tm's
<SmoothCriminals> But i'll work on it
<Cephalgia> True
<Cephalgia> well, it was a start at least
<SmoothCriminals> Im just saying tho, something werent specified in my story for reasons. I was going to alter it once thing got done
<Cephalgia> Ok
<Sariel> That's alright! Your character definately has potential as an "antihero"
<Sariel> just needs a little toning down
<SmoothCriminals> See that the one thing I want people to see. He's not evil but he has no reason to do good. He's with SOLARUS because it was convient for him

Well, since you asked on IRC, here's what we talked about there. Definitely give some toning down, but with some loving care and nurturing he can improve.

One more thing: He might need a demotion in SOLARUS, though he can still be in the company and even know of its purpose, or be a Team Chandra officer. Some of us think executives might be reserved for NPCs, though we dunno yet.

[cooltrainerbro]

this is who appears in my head when I think of "Gant" www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMQKGMS_Df4

[beckstar]

Oct 21, 2010 2:21:55 GMT -5 cooltrainerbro said:

this is who appears in my head when I think of "Gant" www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMQKGMS_Df4

Hahaha, glad I'm not the only one.

[lookoverthere]

Well I asked if I could make him an executive and someone said I could. IDK who. But i'll change it if there's an issue