Johan Ambravic

[maniamax]

trleague.wikia.com/wiki/Johan_Ambravic

First Character I ever really tried to make. Tried to avoid being Mary Sue-ish, but I fear the clothes might be just that =/

[theclae]

There's nothing wrong with the clothes, and the character in general seems solid. I like the ex-Rocket thing, and the fact that the backstory intertwines well with actual Pokémon canon.

The one thing I'd watch for though is that you don't take the whole "brooding orphan" thing to clichéed levels. I'm not saying it's at that level now, but it could perhaps go that way if you're not careful.