My character, Thecla

[theclae]

I posted this elsewhere a few days ago, but this is now my finished draft of my character. If some people could go over my character and give a little bit of feedback, that would be great. I really liked the concept of the character, and I hope the whole "Z-list celebrity" thing she has going on isn't considered inherently Mary-Sueish. She's a pretty awful Pokémon trainer and a pretty flawed character, so I hope it balances out.

trleague.wikia.com/wiki/Thecla

Feedback would be much appreciated.

[cephalgia]

I think she's brilliant in that she's a character engineered to be almost unlikable, yet she's still a person and she tries to be different and make up for the mistakes she's made. Few people ever do something like that. So no, not a Sue at all.

[theclae]

Thankyou very much - that was certainly what I was going for, and I'm glad that it came across that way.

[Máximo]

I think it is an interesting concept of having an ex-famous character, as most of those (View Mary Sue section), are made to be god-like, whereas Thecla is a very solid and balanced character.

[theclae]

Again, I'm really glad you think that.

Any other feedback would be great too.