Toge's Character Evaluations (SMALL UPDATE)

[togexcrown]

(I won't be evaluating Gym Leaders. Maybe another thread for that.)


Trainers that need work...

-Aleph - He should be looked into more. Perhaps more background story. Also, Monferno, Skarmory, and Jolteon should be either explained more, or expelled from the team. It just seems like he conviently happened on to these pokemon with no real explination.

-Brandon Daniels - More info is needed on him. "Letting the adventure define him" is no excuse for laziness.

-Dash Triumph - Started at 10, is now 15. 32 badges. I'm not sure how one should feel about this.

-Charles - Needs an explination into espeon and Seviper. More info into background is needed.



Trainers that are on the fence...

-Brian "Sky" Kaylen - (The "sky" part...next thing we know he'll want us to call him sora :/ But I start off by digressing.)
Anyways, I'd put him under the ok trainers, it's just his team. Maybe a tone down on the starters. But other than that he's fine. A nice balance between age, time, and pokemon.

-Bustah - Seems very john doe to me. Or are we using Mary Sue for the guys too? Anyways, imo, I feel like I've seen his profile a
thousand time.

-David Jetta - His personality is ENTIRELY mary sue. "Shy and reserved, but is a nice guy when he opens up" (Seriously?) His background is fine.

-Ed - Needs info into where his Pokemon came from. Also, more background.


Trainers that are ok/excellent

-Alice Xu

-Amy Duff

-Ashi J

-Curtis DeLoye




(NOT DONE YET)

(If you have any problem with these, feel free to comment.)

[cephalgia]

No problem I see currently.

[theclae]

I'd be interested to see this completed.

[GordonTheWritefag]

I second that.

[cephalgia]

Looks like Toge isn't working on this anymore, but here's a page I started.

We can put together a pretty comprehensive database from this.

trleague.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Evaluation

[togexcrown]

I am workin on it on a separate word document. New people are joining and throwing me out of wack. Give it some time, I should be done soon. No need to jump the gun.

[beckstar]

Yeah, I totally realized that I made DJ sound wicked cliche, I'm just not sure how to phrase what I have in mind. .-. He wasn't suppose to even sound like a particularly nice guy or anything. Anyway, I edited his personality section so hopefully it's a little closer to what I actually want to say.

[deloye]

-David Jetta - His personality is ENTIRELY mary sue. "Shy and reserved, but is a nice guy when he opens up" (Seriously?) His background is fine.

Cliched is not the same as a Sue. We really need to tone down on throwing that term everywhere...

[cephalgia]

Well thanks for the work so far, Toge! I credited you. ;o

The wiki page has been updated. David Jetta's personality got a revamp, though, so I put him in the no work needed section.

trleague.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Evaluation